急~``速度~``帮我修改下我的英语作文,很短的!

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I always wake up on the dot of six o’clock in the morning. After I’ve had a shower, I make up my face, and then I have breakfast lonely.

I go to the bus station usually at 7:10 a.m. and I catch 58# bus to go to Qingyanggong station, after walking about ten minutes to my college.

Since I get college, it is start my class at 8:00 a.m. Studying at college, I know how boring it is to be distracted. I am not a school-friendly person. Provided when I do about eight hours’ study a day, I manage to keep on top.

In the evening my parents and I eat together, while we can catch up with each other’s news from the day.
帮我修改下,要符合英语国家的习惯.用点漂亮的词替换也行~``

I always wake up on six o’clock every morning. After shower, I make up my face, and then I have breakfast lonely.

I usually go to the bus station at 7:10 a.m. and catch NO.58 bus to Qingyanggong station, after walking about ten minutes ,I enter into my college.

I start my class at 8:00 a.m.since I went into this college.I know how boring it is to be distracted. I am not a school-friendly person. Provided when I have to study about eight hours a whole day, I manage to keep it on.

We have dinner with my parents in the evening ,and we will share the special things happened on each other.

ialways wake up on the dot of six o’clock in the morning. After I’ve had a shower, I make up my face, and then I have breakfast lonely.

I go to the bus station usually at 7:10 a.m. and I catch 58# bus to go to Qingyanggong station, after walking about ten minutes to my college.

Since I get college, it is start my class at 8:00 a.m. St